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This is a follow up, of sorts, to a previous drawing of mine called 'I've been dreaming, I've been waiting...' which featured Scoots dreams with Rainbow Dash.

This time we have Sweetie Belle and Rarity. And honestly, this could be so much better.

I wanted to have Sweetie design a dress and Rarity be proud of her or something, but then I remembered I can't design dresses to save my life. :D So I fell back on the idea that Sweetie can help Rarity out (without ruining everything) with her magic.

Even so, I don't like how this turned out. Rarity looks a bit creepy. :P

Still, I might as well upload it. Someone might like it!

Scootadreams here:

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Sweetie Belle dreaming is even cuter than the dream which is already so d'awww.
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~BB-K May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, nice dreams. :)
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=PonyProse May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think you'll find that some people do, in fact, like it :)
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:iconpirill-poveniy:
Well I can see some problems with Rarity..firstly, her eyelashes go UNDER the head's outline. Other weirdness might be with her ear..since she's looking down slightly, the ear would be more towards the back of the head and angled a bit differntly. Maybe there's something with the forelock as well that I can't see...

The picture itself is great though, I can see Sweetie Belle dreaming of something like this.
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~TwodeePony May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can agree with all of those things. And I can't believe I derped the eyelashes; I should have noticed that! Might fix and re-upload.

The only way I could really fix Rare would be to re-draw her completely I think. I doubt I'll bother :P

Thank you though! :D
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:iconpirill-poveniy:
^^ We learn from our mistakes. I'm just glad I can point them out obsessively.:icontwilightinsaneplz:
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~TwodeePony May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I appreciate the critique, like you say, I'll never get better otherwise :P My first MLP drawing makes me cringe :D
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:iconpirill-poveniy:
Hah, tell me about it..I'm still thinking of whether I should ever show my first try to the public.
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